Thesis statement:
The emission of high pollutant increases its effect on global warming.
The outline(chain rule):
Human action casuing the emission of pollutant
ex. the use of cars, the use of a/c.s
->
High amount of CO2 is being emitted
->
Causes the breakdown of ozone layer
->
Increases the Earth's sea level as the amount of sunlight increases
->
more heat comes to the surface of the Earth
->
(occurs simultaneously with previous step)
People tend to use air conditioners with the rise of temperature/
overuse of energy
->
The concept overlaps and the cycle continues which will ultimately cause the global warming.
Jayoung, I'd like you to work on this topic. Your topic seems to be very informative, and it requires good examples and statistics that support the causal chains that affect the following things. I'm looking forward to reading the paper. :)
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